Part 6 - Screenplay and feedback

I got some feedback from the script I wrote for our scenes, and as I was hoping it was alright, which is nice hearing it from someone. The dialogue needs more work still but, that shouldn't be a problem. I will probably have to rewrite it at some point, now I'm focusing on the screenplay. I have managed to at least plan out all but the last three events of the game; I have gone over them and added some details where I could to make my life easier. I want to get a decent amount of work done now since I've got several deadlines coming up this month and the beginning of April, so I'm probably not going to have much time to work on this until early April.